Tamahome:
Why, oh why, do I end up in a fight with every single introduced character? Still, I'll look past that and we shall see what we shall see...
Ah, so this was a challenge, was it? That would explain why this is the second fic I've read with this premise. Still, this is good; I like to see what people do with the same ideas.
There's always a tradeoff with HTML'ing fics - you can make it pretty and really snazzy, but that requires intricate coding and layout, which can sometimes be a bitch to load. I have to use public access terminals, and each and every chapter took a full minute to load. They were very pretty, but it cost me money, which meant I was NOT in a charitable mood.
I note that Laree is aware of the 'Suboshi is the name of a Seiryuu constellation' problem, good.
All else aside, I like this story. It's well-paced and pretty action-packed - Tasuki's going to like it. Not only does he get lots of action, he also gets backup in our fights (grumble, nobody ever gives *me* an ally, grumble).
I didn't note any glaring grammatical or spelling errors, so I could read uninterrupted. When the page finally loaded up, that was. Take that as a compliment, Laree - even though I started each and every chapter in a bad mood, I *still* enjoyed it!
