Suzaku Seishi Fan Fiction Review: Chance Encounters

Chance Encounters
Author: Night~Mare
Email: na_no_da@yahoo.com
Warnings: Mitsukake's past
Type: Hmm...not quite drama...a 'lil bit of romance...uhm...no snrking...^_^. A happy 'lil fic.

Tasuki:
Hey! This was really #$%&$ good! It needed to be beta-read, as it had some errors here and there, but that didn't take away from the story.
You know, this is exactly how I myself had figured it had happened, well, maybe-with-a-few-differences-but-basically-the-same. And yes, I AM being vague because I don't wanna spoil the fun! *cackles*
Send more stuff! Send mooooooore! *sweatdrops and looks behind himself at a sound at the door*
<.< oh @#^$... O_O
*runs screaming from Mits' goat that seems to be following him after the green egg and clam incident*

Hotohori:
This was cute. It had some problems with grammer/punctuation/sentence flow, but that could probably be fixed by a beta-reader. I really liked the point of view this came from...
*pauses as he watches Tasuki go running by screaming about a goat*
Ano...
*blinks and then remembers what he was saying*
Oh yes...overall I liked the fic. Keep up the good work.

Nuriko:
*Blinks, peering through the door.* Tasuki? I thought I heard a scream? No one here... huh. *Steps inside and picks up the papers scattered around.* He makes such a mess at times. What's this? *Sits down and starts leafing through the fic.*
*Puts it down a while later, smiling softly* Now that was good. It took me a bit to realize who's point of view it was, but I'll save that so others won't get spoiled. I'm a sucker for originality and this one is definately one of the most original I've seen in a long time. It got off to a bit of a jerky start, but it kept its pace nicely after that.
So many fics concentrate on one specific event in a character's life (Believe me, I'm just as guilty of it.) that it was *good* to see a differing fic. Keep up the wonderful work, Night~Mare, I can't wait to read more of your fics!

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