Suzaku Seishi Fan Fiction Review: Closure

Closure
Author: Stormlight
Email: Riverfell_Den@hotmail.com
Warnings: I'll say 44 to 48, just to be safe. Vague spoilers for earlier episodes, also.
Type: It's a drama. Kind of a WAFF, too. Deals with Hotohori, Houki, and Miaka.

Tasuki:
*blinks as the fic slips from his fingers and sits up quickly* I'm awake! Really!
Ehhhh.... *rubs the back of his head*
It was nice enough, though slow and mushy. I'm sure fans of romance would like this one for Heika and Miaka, as it did close a loose end. And it was good to see heika and the empress together. *stretches* Not a bad work, just too mushy for me.
*picks the fic up and puts it back on the table, giving it a pat and moving on*

Nuriko:
*Smiles* I liked it the first time I read it, and I like it even more now. It may be too mushy for our resident wall decoration, but it was good to see this issue closed between them, with both happy at the result.
Good job, Stormlight!

Chichiri:
Another enjoyable (and yes, emotional) fic no da!
One really feels for Miaka and Hotohori in this one, the feelings they have (had?) for each other comes thru quite well.
*sighs* If only they could have been together, but as Miaka (and the rest of us) well knows, Fate has its own ideas no da.
This story is set up quickly and draws the reader in almost immediately, not an easy thing to accomplish. The writing is smooth and simple and...well...it's just wonderful no da!!
Another 5 kasa fic! I can end this review in only one way, by repeating Nuriko.
Yes, good job, Stormlight no da!

Hotohori:
I truly enjoyed this fic the first time I read it, and I find that I like it even more with the second read. I put aside my dislike of Houki (and it's usually not that easy for me to do that! ^_~), to let the story have more of an effect on me. It's wonderful, very tender and it does bring closure to that love triangle. Good work! Now I want to see more.
*grins and sparkles*

Chiriko:
ANOTHER Hotohori/Miaka fic? With Houki mixed in on top of it? *is in pain from head so this will probably be a rather unfair review*
Actually, I like this one. It touches me a touch more, but since I'm STILL not in the mood for WAFF....
Nice bit about Keisuke, nice closing description of Houki, nice all-around. Smooth writing, no grammar problems, and the font color is better on my eyes- still, I think I would prefer black. When you lay out a page, readers shouldn't have any problems, and I always have problems with colored fonts- it just gets worse when I'm tired.
Nice resolution of the Hotohori/Miaka relationship.
4 kasas.

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