Suzaku Seishi Fan Fiction Review: The Enemy Inside

The Enemy Inside
Author: Fran-Nyan and Ju-chan
Email: Franthenut@yahoo.com
Warnings: Fic two in a series, comes after 'two is better then one' [http://members.xoom.com/_XMCM/FranTheNut/Fanfic/Fanfics.htm for info]
Type: Drama, serious

Tasuki:
Hey! That was $%^*#& cool! The whole fic was a fight! That's my kinda fanfic! Hell yah! HUAH! And the Squirt reached out and smacked somebody too! That's m'boy! *noogies Chiriko*
It's fantasic how the last fic as comedy flowed so smoothly into this serious fic that was so much kick @$$!! Of course, poor Mits, he got treated as the doctor again, but this fic got me so worked up and hyper I'm too thrilled. Please say there's another! PLEASE!!
The story was well written in flow and the action was written so well, there was no confusion. And everyone knows I like the little guy, he's the kid brother I never had. It was great to see someone write our interaction. WOW!
This is one of my favorites. Heh, I wanna read it again!

Nuriko:
Ano... *One shaking hand sets down the papers.* This had to be one of the more compelling stories I've ever had the pleasure to read. The pace was wonderful, fast but not overwhelming... the action was well done, to the point where I never had to wonder where someone was or what they were doing, it was all VERY well detailed. I haven't read the first part of this series, with the meldings, but I definately will now! No grammatical errors, only one spelling error that I saw, and above all... this fic had a plot that hooked me from the first paragraph and kept me on the edge of my chair.
*Chuckles faintly, tilting his head to the side.* Chichiri-kun, what can I say... you make a great villain, even if it wasn't you. I just really hope I never have to go against you again like that! Chiriko's part in this was also one of the strong points that I saw. It let you see a bit more of the iron will that kid has within him.
Now... all I can do is PRAY that Tasuki doesn't get flame-happy after reading this one. *Thinks a moment* Although Kentucky Fried Monk wouldn't be a bad thing after all those ducks. One more good thing about this fic. NO GOATS!
*Pauses in that thought as the now-resident goat walks by, headed for the room of a certain bandit.* Ne, Tasuki? Your blind date is here!

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