Fushigi Akugi Avec Los Byakko et Genbu Shichisei
Author: Ai-chan, Ryn and Kitsune
Email: suboshi_no_aijin@hotmail.com
Warnings: No warnings that are really needed except Tamahome won't like one of the references made.
Type: Additionally, the lesser known Byakko and Genbu Seishi are used in it, as well as both Mikos. What else...it doesn't involve any of you or the Seiryuu Shichisei. It does use all four Mikos. What else...that's it...just be prepared for a lot of strange references and jokes that are subtle and when you get it you think, damnit I can't believe it!

	Hotohori: I...I don't know what to really say about this. ^^;; I really think that you should have avoided the script format, and maybe tried to flesh the stories out more. I could tell that they were SUPPOSED to be funny...but they weren't. Gomen.
	Mitsukake: @____@ *twitch* Script format...Suzaku no! *shudder* Gomen nasai to the authors, but I just couldn't finish it. There's just something about script format that is inherently painful. Some bits of what I did see was actually pretty humorous, but after a while it just stopped making sense. (However, given what sorts of fics tend to go through here, we're used to things not making sense. But that only goes so far.) I can' t really say anything about this one one way or the other. Gomen once more.
	Nuriko: *Walks in, holding his head in his hands and falls into a chair* Mitsukake, I have a headache... This one was painful. Gomen, there's just no delicate way to put that. The script format made it so that all I wanted to do was read through it as quickly as possible, and I don't think I made it all the way through. The way it jumped around, and the bits at the beginning of each segment stating who it was from, etc just made it so that it didn't flow well at all. This one's got potential to be an amusing fic, it just needs to be done in a story format instead of script.
	Chichiri: I agree with my fellow seishi no da. Script writing is not only somewhat painful to read, it's confusing no da!!! I got lost in between the switching from one part to another and I think in doing so I missed a large part of the jokes. I too admit to zipping thru script formats quickly just to get them read and over with. This could be a very funny story but it needs a bit of filling in to create the overall spoof. After all, a building without mortar to fill up and hold everything together is simply a pile of bricks no da.
	Tasuki: Hey, it was funny! Though I agree it could have used a bit more filling in. The amount of scene changing and repetitive action started to become confusing. There was a bit too much Tokaki groping and kissing and drooling, for example. Smoother transistioning and a bit more background would have helped. It's cool in small amounts, but after a while it got annoying. It sounded like the authors had a lot of fun and that's what really counts in the end. Though it was interesting to see everyone's interpretation of the unknown seishi. The only unfortunate thing was that since we don't know what their personalities were like, the jokes just weren't as funny as having someone well known acting crazy. Using the Seiryuu might have been cool in this. I can't really call this a fic. It's more just random insanity. And not too many people can take that much insanity in one sitting. I'd say this was an amusing one time read.
	Tamahome: *blinks* Is it over yet? Can I go home now? Why in script format? And was I the only one who got almost none of it? If it had made more sense I'm sure it would have been very good. And now I can go to sleep. *falls asleep*

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