Green Egg Foo Young with Clam
Author: Author formally known as AveryJ/ Or just plain AveryJ
Email: tasuki-genro@home.com
Warnings: I dunno? It has that D-word but the rest of the curse words are censored.
Type: Poem/comedy. I dunno? Everytime I mark it as comedy, it turns out to be a horror or serious fic? But this is clean fun! Except for Mitsukake's...never mind....
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Hotohori:
This was an incredibly funny parody on Dr. Seuss's Green Eggs With Ham. My only problem with it really was the fact that a few words didn't rhyme. I liked it, and seeing that this is me, that in itself is rather amazing. Good work.
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Tasuki:
>.> ........ *side-glances at fic*
<.< ........ *side-glances at Chiriko*
EVILLLLLLLL!!! I TOLD you he was @#^)*&^&$ EVILLLLLL!! But you didn't believe me, DID YA?
AT first it was funny and cute... then his real evil nature shone through! *swallows more stomach medicine*
>_< blegh... THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT, CHIRIKO!! It was really cute, really #$%&^% cute, I tell yah! KEEP THAT GOAT AWAY FROM ME!!
The only thing off in this fic was that 'Nun' doesn't rhyme with 'Konan'. Being that the 'a' in Konan is pronouned like the 'a' in 'all'. Maybe try "Would you like them with a fawn?" @_@ Yes, I must go frolic with the @#$%^*(%^ deer! BWAHAHAHAHA!!!!!
*clutches his stomach and curls up* >_<
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Nuriko:
BAHAHAHA!!! *Rolls out of his chair laughing so hard that tears streak down his face.* Oh, Suzaku, that was funny! Makes sense too... once you add sake into the mix, Tasuki'll eat just about anything! *Collapses into giggles once more.*
Chiriko, I didn't know you could be so conniving. *Snicker* Although I had trouble with the rhyming of Konan, and some of the rest of it was just a bit hard to keep up with. I kept getting the original Dr. Seuss bit in my head and with the added cursing on the part of our favourite red-headed bandit boy, the timing was a bit off. Ah well...
*Cracks up again, heading for Mitsukake.* Hey Mits! Tasuki's got a tummy-ache!
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