Suzaku Seishi Fan Fiction Review: Heavenly Playground Parts 1

Heavenly Playground 1&2
Author: Night~mare
E-mail: night_mare_chan@yahoo.com
Warnings: Not many umm...mild mild spoilers for seishi's past but nothing most people don't already know.
Type: Series. I can hear some of you groaning! It's not *that* long! *cough* comparitively speaking.

Chichiri:
*sets the fic down and chuckles*
Delightful no da. What else is there to say? Simply delightful!
This is one of the most enjoyable fics I've seen in a long time. The story doesn't lag and everything flows along so smoothly. I can just see the four gods carrying on so! Poor Taiitsukun, I never realized she had it so rough with them.
*skims thru the fic and chuckles again*
Hai. Yes, yet another great fic from Night_Mare.
The usual 5 kasas no da!

Mitsukake:
Ah, Night~Mare, you never fail us, do you? And I always *did* wonder why my cat cross-dresses...*ignores the antics of said neko in the background*
It was cute beyond belief, though a little unsettling to think that the four gods used to act like that. *snrk* Seriously, though-most of the time, a story consisting almost entirely of squabbling will begin to grate on the reader's nerves. However, our most reliable author-san has discovered the rare trick of making it *work*, of keeping the arguments amusing, the arguers alive and involved, and the whole thing filled with a sort of chaotic fun. (Indeed, I was half-expecting the scroll it was written on to start bouncing around like a Nyan Nyan on speed. That is how nutty this fic is. ^_^)
Kasas? Hmm...what's the biggest number on our scale again? *SNRK*

Tamahome:

Well, I always *did* wonder why He gave me that kanji... And I guess He didn't realize what He was doing when He supercharged the Nyan-Nyans... but I have to admit I never thought of the Gods as twelve-year-olds! Possessive twelve year olds who squabble over ANYTHING... poor Chiriko. I guess this explains a lot!
This fic is hysterical, but I won't concentrate on plot, rather technicalities. There were a few typos, mostly punctuation (a full stop outside the inverted commas, that sort of thing). Nothing terribly major; I wouldn't have spotted them if I hadn't reread twice. Spelling and grammar good - the bane of the reviewer has been averted. The smooth flow really pulls the reader along. But the squabbling *did* get a bit annoying towards the end. They simply didn't interact any other way!
I will DEFINITELY be reading the rest of the series.

Tasuki:
Hey, yeah! This f$%^#@ rocks! I like it! Seeing the gods as kids was rather neat! Though I think Suzaku got fried just a bit much to think the girls in my family could cook!
Bakahome said there were typos, but hell, I didn't even notice! Good flow and characterization, it just pulled yah right along! Though the fighting did get a touch annoying with it going on all the time, but it was fun!
And I really liked Genbu! o_o Genbu was hilarious! He kept falling asleep! Bwahahahaha!! And Taiitsukun booted him out the window! *cackles* Hey, get us summore of this! Be happy to read it!
Four whatevers till it's finished!

Nuriko:
*Picks himself up off the floor, still snickering and wiping tears from his eyes*
Oh my gods, that was hilarious! Even the bickering was amusing, although it did tend to get tedious to read through. Byakko screaming 'Shove it ya old bag!' was just priceless and had me sliding out of my chair. If there were spelling and grammatical errors, I was too wrapped up in the story to catch them. *Giggle*
You must write more of this soon, and I can't wait to see it.
5 kasas!

Hotohori:
This fic is delightful, certainly an interesting idea about the gods. *chuckles* I almost feel sorry for Taiitsukun, having to deal with four adolescent boys. The bickering is very amusingly done, and it gives a good sense of sibling rivalry between the four gods. There were a few grammatical mistakes, but the fic was so funny I easily overlooked them while reading. Great work, Night~mare! I'll definately be looking for more.
4 kasas!

Chiriko:
*drops jaw* SHEESH! I should read everything before reviewing!
Night~mare, this is a gem! It's clever, VERY creative and unique, well-written, and... well, finish it, dammit! That's about all I can say!
5 kasas!!!

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