Suzaku Seishi Fan Fiction Review: The Sake Bet

The Sake Bet
Author: Asidian Morris
Warnings: Shonen ai, touch of ecchi (Chiriko might not want to look at this one... ^^;
Type: Romantic Comedy

Mitsukake:
*opens mouth*
*closes mouth*
*opens mouth again and stares blankly at the screen*
*snrk...*
MUAHAHAHA!! This was great! It-heheheh...*snrks* Okay, gotta finish the review...*snort* I'm sorry, I can't get over the part where Kouji got drunk and just cheerfully announced the plan to the *world*! I can't even *think* straight, it was that funny. :P This author is officially now ranked among my favorites. Good spelling/grammar (I didn't see any mistakes), good color scheme, GREAT sense of comedic timing and situational humor, and the ending was more messed up than anything I've ever seen. I'm not sure how many kasas to rate it, but I'm guessing it's somewhere in the triple digits.
Any chance of a sequel? Please? ^____^

Tamahome:
Hee hee hee...
This was FUNNY. I loved it!
Nobody was out of character, and every event was logical and reasonable and well-thought out. So many yaoi fics throw characterisation and natural law out the window. This was a refreshing change.
I am still snickering over Kouji's Chichiri impression... bet you never thought of yourself as *that* predictable, did you Chichiri? I, like the bandits, was mightily entertained.

Tasuki:
*blink blink* Ehhh....It started out pretty good...Most of it was pretty damn funny! Of course Kouji talks to himself even if alone! That's how he started! And his schmuck impression was to die laughin over!
And then....I had to bail near the end. *scratches his head*
So there's my review of most of the fic. *lifts two thumbs and grins* Write more like this! Um, 4 whatevers, since I couldn't finish!

Nuriko:
*DIES laughing* Okay, okay, you've managed to do the impossible! I normally cringe when I see Chichiri's name mentioned in a yaoi fic. For some reason, I just canNOT see the monk with anyone. He IS a monk, after all.
However, this one just cracked me up. The mental image of Kouji running around with the mask and tearing down the hall yelling about Tasuki and Chiri sitting in a tree... *Snicker* Oh man, I've got to re-read this one.
There were no spelling or grammar errors that I could find, the format of the page was easy to read, and it was an absolute RIOT.
5 kasas!

Chiriko:
Oh, dear....
*giggles* WHY is everyone so concerned about me reading "older" material? I'll have you know that I'm more mature that any of the others! Smarter, too!
*reads it and starts blushing bright red* Was this posted on yaoi no hentais? It looks AWFULLY familiar.... *sees other Seishi staring at him in astonishment* Hey! I was... um, researching! YEAH! That's right! Research!
It's a cute fic- the bet is good, and it's cute that Tas was setting Chi up. I'm glad it didn't get TOO hentai... if it did, it would have spoiled the piece.
All and all, I'll give it a 3.5. It's well done, but really isn't to my taste. I just can't suspend my disbelief long enough to be convinced that Tas and Chi are a couple.

Hotohori:
*chuckles*
I like it! I'm normally not too big on fics that pair Tasuki and Chichiri, but this was hilarious! Who knew Kouji could so successful impersonate Chichiri? Very humorous fic, and I didn't see any spelling or grammer mistakes either. 5 kasas!

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