Nuriko: But... but... but... Where am I? *Sniff* I liked this fic a lot, mainly because I've never seen a fic written from the perspective of one of the reincarnated seishi. Oh I'm sure they're out there, I just haven't seen them. There were a couple of spelling errors (staid instead of stayed), and some misplaced punctuation, but it wasn't enough to detract from the story at all. The journal entry style was nicely done, and I do hope to see more along these lines soon!
	Mitsukake: Hmm...creative, relaxed, in-character, fun, and (no offense meant here, but I gotta be honest) easier to read than the 'new wings' piece ... Great! :) Even the fact that my part in this resurrected the old trauma of the Brazilian soccer player garbage didn't ruin the fic, and that's saying a LOT. ^^;; This is a nice little somewhat-alternate-but-not-quite-and-yet-still-really-fun universe you have going here, and I do hope we get some more set in it! It's not all that often that I like alternate reality/reincarnation stuff, but I could see myself getting addicted to these. *grins*
	Tamahome: Hey, Mitsukake! Considering the amount soccer players get paid, and how short the average World Cup soccer player's soccer career is, has it ever occurred to you that you're actually financing your medical training? Ah, but I'm meant to be talking about the fic.... I *like* Houki. The Empress is a very sweet lady, and she has always been very friendly to us Shichiseishi. Plus she keeps Hotohori's attention well away from Miaka. It's nice to know she's here, too. It's interesting that Hotohori dreams of his past, but doesn't make the connections where everyone else has. Perhaps he had a more secular upbringing this time around. I'm glad to see that you've decided to make a series of this scenario. It's one I appreciate. And finally - the identity of Hotohori's manager. >_< That's just WICKED. Absolutely EVIL. Can we have his journal entry soon?
	Tasuki: Hm....slow, inner monolgue, but I liked it. It kinda figures Hotohori would be more focused on his music than tryin' ta figure out what the weirdness is. He always had other thin's on his mind like the empire and stuff. I find the band thing interestin'! I always wanted ta be a rock star! At last, worshipped for my greatness! *cough* Um, yeah, this was s'pposed ta be about Hotohori... I liked how everythin' was calm, but not over-angsty. Cause Heika was a calm guy. And that he met Houki too was great to see. Difficult to pin down exactly what made this good, but that was my try!

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