Chichiri: Ah...this was a strange one all right no da!! But it WAS funny! I'm trying to imagine Nakago as a royal babe and finding it a bit difficult. (No,actually I'm imagining it quite well while having a pleasant mental picture of his parents throwing the baby out with the bathwater no da!) The characters were set up quite well and although I would have preferred the authors to use the forms ^&%$#* instead of the actual words (I know, I'm a bit of a prude no da...)the dialogue went well. (Nakago in a blue bubble bath no da?? Now THAT mental picture I could do without!!) This is an amusing story but it doesn't really stand out. I give it 2 kasas no da.

Tasuki: Err...I think part of the enjoyment of this fic was taken from me because it was about Golden Boy. Other than that, it was really #$%^*& funny! And it was good to see Miboshi get a bit more than bad press. The twins had great dialogue! *snickers* The author things could have been done without, as you sorta slammed into and tripped over them while reading. And they didn't really enhance the story. That's sorta the self-insertion monster lurking. I'm sure fans of Clam Boy and Super Blonde would like this, and it was great to read, if just for the humor! I'd have to give it 3 Clams/Kasas/Tessens/Goats/Whatever/etc. ;)

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