Tasuki: *lowers the fic with staring eyes and just stares for a few moments. Then his lower lip trembles.* WAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!! *He glomps onto Mitsukake* I got there too late! I didn't get a f@#(&% chance to say goodbye! It wasn't right! *sniffle* Yeah, it was a good fic, and I felt it...and...it took a little while to figure out who was speaking...and it was good.... *sniffles and clings to Mitsukake like koala*
	Chichiri: Beautiful. Simply beautiful no da. It's getting more and more difficult to write fanfics depicting the deaths of seishi as they have been done so many times and in so many formats. To come up with one with a totally different view shows the talent of Night mare. This was done in a very emotional manner that wasn't overdone. I had thought with all the fanfics I have read another one wasn't going to bring tears but this one did no da. I give it 5 kasas (as soon as I find a handkerchief to dry my eyes no da!)
	Mitsukake: .....*mumbles something and shuffles* These sorts of fics get kinda...you know...awkward to read. I think I'm biased (considering the content), so I won't say too much, except: dang, Night~Mare, don't you ever write anything *bad*? *tired grin* Ano...are you okay, Tasuki? *is not sure whether to pry the bandit off or leave him where he is until he gets this out of his system* Oh, heck with it. *pats him on the shoulder* Take it easy, you're starting to worry me. *another tired smile* (Sometimes I think you authors do these things on purpose. )
	Tamahome: Another Night~mare fic... ... okay, now I'm ready. What can be said? When Night~mare does angst, she does it SUPERBLY. I don't know who I was sadder for, Tama-neko or Chichiri... oh, definitely Tama-neko. I've always been a cat person. Night~mare, I'd go over this in Notepad if I didn't HTML it - some funny symbols came through on my browser (IE Win2000 edition). But they were the usual 'text-conversion playing silly buggers with the punctuation' type, so don't panic over-much. I'm going back to read this one again. It's so great...
	Nuriko: *Blinks, sniffling slightly and looking over at Tasuki* I'm with him. Very few fics concerning the seishi's deaths can catch my attention, but I liked the way this one was written. Then again, I've always been a fan of Tama-neko. *Smiles* It was short, but very poignant, and once again, there's not much praise I can give it that hasn't already been said. *Smiles* Beautiful work once again, Nightmare. 3 kasas
	Chiriko: Ok, I'm gonna go against the rest, and say... well, I was bored. I think I've seen one too many FY angst pieces- after all, they keep COMING! I WILL give Night~Mare-san points for using Mitsukake as the angst victim (I'm sure the Legendary Laurelgand has something to do with it), but this is very much like a Tas lament for Nuriko or Chiriko. There's nothing new. I think I'm getting jaded. As usual, though, Night~Mare writes well.... I'd just like to see her tackle a more original plot. She has the capability (we all admit that she's in the top ten active FY authors); now she just needs to take that step into the unknown.

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